Very nice !
I love the way your music tells a story. Even without the commentary in your video we understand where we are going.
I like the change of tone when the hero is dead(?). It goes from D minor to Ebm.
The orchestration is great and the whole is very coherent.
But as I like to nitpick and we are also here to talk about the points on which we can progress, I would say that your themes and your melodies are at the same time a little too backward compared to the general harmony and that they are a little "messy". I took the time to listen several times to your creation and I think I understood why I have this feeling.
If you agree, I will post a more detailed explanation. Is that okay?
But I remind you that I find your music very very good.
