Memories Frozen in Time shows attempts at emotional matters, but its lacking execution weakens the whole project. With an inconsistent prose, the narrative spends too much time in descriptions and less important details, leaving no time for a proper conclusion. Characters are simple and the emotions are straightforward, but none of that clarity is really used the project advantage. The presentation often suffers with unchanging sprites that make it hard to tell the different points in time apart, and poorly edited BGs that are often distracting in their distortion. MFiT could have used more polishing and a couple of words to become a more memorable experience, but as it is, there's barely anything of note here.

I really liked this one! Even for just a demo at this time, the characters were fleshed out well!

• I enjoyed Menzie and the MC's dynamic, and how the backgrounds have been altered to show how things have fallen apart after the MC's parent's divorce.
• Great sprites
• Unique plot for an FVN - so often it's the MC romancing/getting romanced, and so I think that having the MC try to get her father to date his best friend is a unique way to explore gay themes in a story, but from another angle

Would like to see more of this story in the future!

Perhaps the most depressing of the Novembears, Since November follows a borderline superficial brand of nihilism that is more annoying and embarrassing than moving. While seeing these portrayals of different reactions to the situation is interesting and engaging, this cast of 20-somethings act too much like parody of that demographic, weakening a lot of the impact. That said the build up to the reveal is fantastic and the art (even much of the unfinished parts) works excellently with a solid script. This project misery lit lacking in its melancholic beauty or insightful misery, but it is still well-made enough to move and enrapture readers for its duration.