Wow, there's some tight worldbuilding going on here. The prompts do a lot of good work to build a compelling setting, and I really dig the recurring themes (like Hillfolk).
Favourite details: Heirloom wedding dress (treasure); Deep mines of the Hillfolk; the Woodfolk queen's healer (as an opponent, which makes it so much more interesting).
Would be nice to have: A little less, I guess? It's super dense writing for a one-page piece, and the cover / name prompts could probably have been cut to keep it trim. But this might be standard practice for a 24XX! This is my first time reading a piece in the system.
Either way, really solid work here. Immediately grabs you and offers avenues to intrigue.
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Wow, there's some tight worldbuilding going on here. The prompts do a lot of good work to build a compelling setting, and I really dig the recurring themes (like Hillfolk).
Favourite details: Heirloom wedding dress (treasure); Deep mines of the Hillfolk; the Woodfolk queen's healer (as an opponent, which makes it so much more interesting).
Would be nice to have: A little less, I guess? It's super dense writing for a one-page piece, and the cover / name prompts could probably have been cut to keep it trim. But this might be standard practice for a 24XX! This is my first time reading a piece in the system.
Either way, really solid work here. Immediately grabs you and offers avenues to intrigue.
This is amazing!