Great job! You do a great job building that slow sense of dread, and the narrator discovering the environment with minimal exposition keeps things engaging. My only tips would be that your font seems a little weird (l's are bolded), and the story ties  very loosely into the theme of "creative resources".

Oh I really liked the atmosphere and the subject matter. This is the first time Ive seen the star host written like the ancient sleeping creatures that they are. Really good job

Oh I really liked the atmosphere and the subject matter. This is the first time Ive seen the star host written like the ancient sleeping creatures that they are. Really good job