Play Story
Renegade's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #14 | 3.722 | 3.810 |
| Concept & Originality | #18 | 3.722 | 3.810 |
| Overall | #18 | 3.582 | 3.667 |
| Adherence to the Theme | #19 | 3.303 | 3.381 |
Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Well that has the feels. What could be harder than going against all you've been taught was true for something you believe in that challenges those beliefs?
That's what I was going for. Thanks for the read!
A dastardly internal struggle, I loved the atmosphere found in the beginning paragraphs. I really sets the mood. The flow of the story was very good, with a well made flashback. You adeptly preformed the disjointed story.
I feel as if the connection to the theme of the jam was a bit loose. Kenith didn't seem to have much problem making his choice.
All in all, I liked the story. I appreciate your participation in the Jam, and am excited for what you make next.
Thanks you for taking time to read and comment! I really appreciate the feedback!
Kenith’s internal struggle is vividly painted against the backdrop of political and societal expectations. ZeterZero highlights the weight of one's personal conviction when faced with an untenable situation.
Thank you for taking time to red and comment! I appreciate the kind words!