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Dwarven Luck's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to the Theme | #15 | 3.522 | 3.522 |
| Concept & Originality | #25 | 3.391 | 3.391 |
| Flow & Clarity | #27 | 3.130 | 3.130 |
| Overall | #27 | 3.348 | 3.348 |
Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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You feel squeezed between a rock and a hard place? All you need is dwarven luck. Nice little romp. I like dwarven stories but was trying to determine if these were Sky-City (air ships) or regular dwarves (helicopters). One suggestion, use the template's font sizes and don't write you story in bold and you can fit more text if you need to. Fun story.
Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.
Yeah, I wasn't sure about the font, when I first exported it as a PDF it looked too light to me, I thought darkening it may help. But deemed to have the opposite effect.
Yes, Sky City Dwarves with an old helicopter contraption attached to the air ship for close encounters. 😉
It's my first jam and it's been a lot of fun and everyone has been really helpful.
It's fun being able to play around the worlds of OPR.
All-bold is hard on the eyes once you've read others here, a few typos too, but a decent tale. Good stuff.
Hi.
Yeah, my bad for the bold type I thought it may have helped. We live and learn, I know better for the next jam.
Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it on some level. It was fun to write and take part. 😀