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Heart wrenching!

Very well told. Great stuff.

Great story!

This is a cracking read.

I like the point of view of a faction normally not considered the good guys (depending on your point of view) talking front and centre.

Good stuff!

Hi.

Yeah, my bad for the bold type  I thought it may have helped. We live and learn, I know better for the next jam.

Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it on some level. It was fun to write and take part. 😀

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.

Yeah, I wasn't sure about the font, when I first exported it as a PDF it looked too light to me, I thought darkening it may help. But deemed to have the opposite effect.

Yes,  Sky City Dwarves  with an old helicopter contraption attached to the air ship for close encounters. 😉

It's my first jam and it's been a lot of fun and everyone has been really helpful.

It's fun being able to play around the worlds of OPR.

Excellent little story.

I enjoyed the flow and the rhythm.