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- Wonderful idea for a game! I'm a fan of dating sim games and I think this is a really clever spin on the jam's theme! The art is lovely, the sounds are fitting and even the sneezing sounds from the characters sound perfectly in place and help immerse the player in this world! And the little typing noises when text appears feels very cosy. I honestly can't wait for more, I'll be sure to check back later! Though, the game could use with some background music, you could have fun with it, too, have each character have their own theme, for example, set the theme of the period this is taking place in. Whether it's medieval or something a little more modern, as it's difficult to tell. There are hints of more modern times in the BG, since there is a lamp, but the characters talk about adventuring and such, which is often the case in medieval fantasy games. Another thing would be figuring out how a saving system would work and a settings menu for sound, playback speed and little bits like that. All in all, for a first game, this is really well done! Keep making things!
Link to your Game Design Doc on Google Drive.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FFi2-MazRs_8-iyZAfwzJr0bGmaAG_umnnHhgHWF40k/edit?usp=sharing
Have you checked that your GDD is publicly accessible ?
Yes
Is your game set to public on itch.io so we can see it?
Yes
Summarise your game!
Visual novel, attempting to be chosen by a hero to be purchased (because you're a sword in an item shop).
Please explain how your game fits the theme:
We went super literal. You are a weapon, and you want to make a connection.
Is there anything you'd like the judges to pay particular attention to?
We're all total newbies to game design and development; first time doing a jam and had a lot of fun!
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I enjoyed the story so far, I hope you get to complete the game!
Thank you, we appreciate you playing and can't wait to have a whole game we can share!