Hey everyone :)

I mentioned to the creator of this jam over on Reddit that I recently made a poetry-based Twine game (Here) and it was suggested that I post it to the forum :)

Each passage (choices included) is a tanka poem. It's a Lovecraftian psychological horror story with only bad endings. Through replay, you get a clearer idea of what's going on, though it remains a mystery overall (like most Lovecraftian horror).

(Tanka is a bit like haiku/senryu, but with two 7-syllable lines at the end)

I had a blast writing it. Too bad it's well over the 300 word limit for this contest. 

https://howtophil.itch.io/here

Hey Phillip! Yes! thanks so much for sharing this. I really liked how it flows into  little poems based on your choices. The writing and choices work really well together. The different endings also add a lot of replay value and with the short passages, it didn't feel like a burden to start again. Overall, I really enjoyed it! 

Glad you enjoyed :)

One thing that really helped me with the editing process was the Prepub proofing format: https://www.mcdemarco.net/tools/scree/prepub/

I'd "view proofing copy" with that as my proofing format, get a text-based .md file, and paste that into Grammarly. Then I'd take the corrections suggested by Grammarly and hand-make them in Twine.