The story looks promising however I found typos in the English version, as well as parts which were not translated at all or were translated in a way that felt a bit odd to me (in the sense of arranging the various parts of a sentence in a way that felt a bit unnatural to me).
They did not prevent me from understanding what's going on of course however I'd recommend you double-check the translation in the future, this way as to give your work a more "polished" an ultimately much more enjoyable feel.
Hi, thanks for the feedback, i'm still woking in bugfixing it, i expect to have the game more polished (sorry english is not my first languaje) whith the next updates in a few weeks.
Comments
The story looks promising however I found typos in the English version, as well as parts which were not translated at all or were translated in a way that felt a bit odd to me (in the sense of arranging the various parts of a sentence in a way that felt a bit unnatural to me).
They did not prevent me from understanding what's going on of course however I'd recommend you double-check the translation in the future, this way as to give your work a more "polished" an ultimately much more enjoyable feel.
Hi, thanks for the feedback, i'm still woking in bugfixing it, i expect to have the game more polished (sorry english is not my first languaje) whith the next updates in a few weeks.
If you want more feedback, try making a webgl version.
Most people, including me, don't download zip files from strangers, because it's the internet ;)