I had the opportunity to experience this adventure as a player, and it was a chaotic blast!
I am usually concerned when stories reveal the threat was nothing, but it worked for me and my fellow player. The reserved clues and threat, the random interludes/events, and the starting amnesia prevent the twist ending from being a disappointment and instead turn it into something that feels obvious in hindsight.
With the right playgroup, this is an excellent paranoia-fueled horror-comedy scenario (with the players as the butt of the joke). Great job!
I had the opportunity to experience this adventure as a player, and it was a chaotic blast!
I am usually concerned when stories reveal the threat was nothing, but it worked for me and my fellow player. The reserved clues and threat, the random interludes/events, and the starting amnesia prevent the twist ending from being a disappointment and instead turn it into something that feels obvious in hindsight.
With the right playgroup, this is an excellent paranoia-fueled horror-comedy scenario (with the players as the butt of the joke). Great job!