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PortraitOfMadness's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Creative Development | #4 | 4.382 | 4.800 |
Final Presentation | #8 | 4.199 | 4.600 |
Research + Development | #9 | 4.017 | 4.400 |
Overall | #11 | 3.980 | 4.360 |
Project Documentation | #17 | 3.651 | 4.000 |
Technical / Workflow | #18 | 3.651 | 4.000 |
Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- Beautiful piece. This is a good process to use references pieces from other artist to set the quality bar that you need to reach. If there is an improvement feedback I would make to you : maybe contrast a bit more your scene and play with exposure. Project wise, I wasn't able to access to the map scene, it seems the file is empty in the project content, I have only the assets. Your screenshots are maybe a bit low res with aliasing, they definitely don't sell the quality you put behind. I would have give all the presentation points without these issues.
- This is really strong. Make sure you get all your wood grain going in appropriate directions, and straighten your UVs as much as possible to make your life easier and avoid "jaggies". The door could also have done with a few more edge divisions. Love the final result, well done.
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Looks great, wow!!
Thank You!