Movement has visible jittery. Storyline is meh, Alan moved away from depression too fast. Cindy's emotional development is also too fast. Texture has visible looping, stacking, and clipping (white border). Area a bit too wide (park/riverside) made me think there's exploration.

Good work though. To be expected from a small team and a short development time frame. I really like the final credit scene where Cindy is slowly fading away, whoever picked the music made a great choice.