This was great, especially considering it was your first attempt at a VN :3 I thought you made real creative use of the assets you chose to build your surreal story! 

I know what it's like to have to rely on assets like that because I can't draw to save my life >.< I used to feel really bad about that when I saw all the devs out there who were both writing and drawing for their VNs, but then someone told me that being resourceful enough to compile and edit assets is a skill in itself, so that helped me feel a little better, haha. 

Impressive use of the public domain images to create something really surreal and spooky.

engaging visual novel with unique storyline and well paired graphics! nice work :)