I love a game with storytelling. I will always love a game about the space in between (ie purgatory). Great flavor! The font and some layout choices made it hard to read for myself, personally. I genuinely connect with the game and would love to see others tell their stories.

I love how creative you got with the prompt and how original and intriguing the setting is! All the examples of gameplay really helped me to understand it. I feel like this game can really inspire some fascinating stories from the players. 

Absolutely full of horror flavor and vibe! Very well done examples, and flavor text. You get such a clear image of where this game is trying to take you on your adventure. The text is just a little hard to read in some areas and there are also a few walls of text that can be difficult to read for some people. great submission! 

I love games where more is found out about the characters through mechanics in the story. This is great work! 

Amazing! Love the concept of being in a form of afterlife, or purgatory of sorts. Can't say much about it, I'd like to play this game. 
I will say, it was a bit hard to read the pdf at times due to the font size changing and it being fully capitalized font. Made it a bit difficult to follow the lines. Otherwise, great job formatting it!