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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Narrative | #6 | 4.357 | 4.357 |
| Horny | #8 | 4.143 | 4.143 |
| Harmony | #12 | 3.714 | 3.714 |
| Kink | #13 | 3.571 | 3.571 |
| Overall | #19 | 3.087 | 3.087 |
| Game | #21 | 3.143 | 3.143 |
| Stealth | #29 | 2.643 | 2.643 |
| Sounds | #36 | 1.429 | 1.429 |
| Novelty | #42 | 2.429 | 2.429 |
| Looks | #44 | 2.357 | 2.357 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This was really nice and relaxing! I l especially loved the inclusion of the Toy asking for consent multiple times!
Huff...this one was really good. It has a nice, comfortable atmosphere that made me want to spend more time in it...ehe, I appreciate the care that went into the gender stuff, it's really nice.
Thank you! More is definitely planned and working on. :-}
I like the "what if the universe of Altered Carbon was a good and happy place where you snugglefuck kobolds" vibe a lot. Will keep an eye out for future chapters~
Heee, thanks! And uh, I started writing all this as a personal thing during some of my own gender transition stuff years ago, as just stories. Way before I'd even read Altered Carbon or seen its show! :-}
Good job with this!!!
It's very well written but what I liked most about this game was the consent. I liked how it gives choices and asks the reader what they are comfortable with doing. Well done, can't wait for parts two and three!
Thank you!
There's definitely some basis of this in my own life, and how I interact with people. A sense of being a good toy, myself. :-}
This left me...wistful? Which I did not expect! ❤
This game speaks to me on a gender level. I really appreciate the care and consideration the whole thing takes to transness and gender-nonconforming themes in general. I enjoyed the sort of softness of atmosphere the whole thing gave off. It has a horny soul, but also a very kind and caring one.
Not much in the way of graphics given that it's a IF piece, but the chosen color scheme was pleasant and cute, setting the tone for the story really nicely. Mechanically, the ability to pull out more description for scenes and people was a nice touch.
I'm excited to read more~!
Aw, thank you! It's... based on personal experience for sure, being trans and enby myself. :-}
The description thing was kinda a holdover from lots of days spent on MUCKs, but I didn't want to flood the player with all the world stuff all at once. Glad it worked for you! In later revisions I'll probably add more of those!
I'm trans too, and this made me super happy to play, I can't wait to see more from you <3
I hope you do!