This was very kinky! Your descriptions of Dorothy becoming corrupted were very well written.

The kink was so strong here I could seriously feel it even though it's not one I share :) The use of the repeated abstract items and the changing reaction to them was great.

Oh my, I felt so bad and dirty and loose after playing this game. I really don't want to corrupt Neon, but it's… very satisfying 🤤.

Well done 👌

Well, there's no way to hide the fact that this game has a very noticeable corruption kink indeed. It's certainly interesting, and I can't necessarily hide that I too have a thing for seeing characters get progressively more into-it (to some extent). 

Personally, I like the way the game is setup and the repetition of common elements and how they transmit Dorothy's change within their... awakening over time and I think the narrative and witting clearly transmit how corrupt they have become over time up to the very ending.

And, that pretty much sums it up! It's a great display of character and for what this is it serves the purpose just fine. I'd love to see something with a bit more depth to it though, if you ever set out do something among those lines! Cheers! 🐳

Art is good! Like the aesthetic.

Could probably use a dubcon/ambiguous warning in the page description

This was incredible!!! I genuinely loved this!! Great job!!