ok but why is this gooning prequel vn so fucking funny

the ghost in the suspiciously stained sheet, the robot bartender, the fuckin' goonlines...

this has NO right being as well-written as it is

the ONLY suggestion i would make is to mark the game as playable on web. i think this is holding some people back from playing; i myself default to games that i can play in-browser. this game works in browser already, but isn't marked that way yet.

but yeah, other than that... good hook, good dialogue, surprisingly subtle and funny worldbuilding... it's got it all.

very good work.

Short but sweet, which is what you want in a demo. The writing made me smile multiple times, and I think you've got a good set of story hooks here. The costumes on the bar patrons were fun (I spotted Marge Simpson right away.)

Also, thanks for including a Linux build! 🐧

The writing is amazing god damn! Nice job, enjoyed reading it.