Agreeing with odris_den and Felicity Drake- I thought your use of the title split up into words leading to different passages, followed by the completion of all unlocking the ending was used well.

Beautiful writing. I have lots of questions; the good kind 

I really like how you navigate between the scenes! The story is very sweet, and a little sad

:) good job

Very sweet. At first I though the order of scenes didn't matter, but it works in a subtle way.

I love the way the story works when you view the scenes in different orders, and how the scenes rearrange themselves depending on how you play through it. Wonderful!