I liked the concept but I couldn't play after a few levels because the lines kept sticking together when I was trying to drag them off and get a different order (they'd automatically jump and stick to something when I just clicked on one line to drag it).

Great mechanic. These started simple and got so wicked hard. The character voice was good--it definitely sounded like an old noir film (side note: Double Indemnity would work just great in this format). The implementation is pretty rocky, especially that the Reset button on some of the later levels restarts the entire game, but I know you were trying to build something real tricky in Ren'Py and that must have been difficult. Nice job overall!

it’s a cool concept to be able to link sequences like that. somehow it feels pretty laggy and janky, and i couldn’t unlink the sentences sometimes. anyhow, good job!