I absolutely love this system of dice manipulation and pushing your luck for different values! I wish there was something to guide what the pitches would focus on, but you've already fit so much onto a single business card that it's totally understandable it's left up to players. Nice work! The whole "getting fired but then being immediately rehired" is my favorite for sure.

PS: Under "Formatting" (the Time Action) it says "Flip one D6s" which should use "D6" (singular) as Creativity and Sabotage do.