Really beautifully written. I felt really captivated by the experience like being lost in my own daydream. :)

This is written in such a beautiful, poetic way; it's simply wonderful. Each topic is explored very well, leaves the player to ponder such things, and reveals a little more about the character (who I assume is Raymond). What happens after the rock crashes into me, though? Did Raymond wake up?

btw, I'm also in this Twiny Jam! My game is HCF. Check it out?)