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A jam submission

Out in the DarkView game page

A short horror story, made in Twine
Submitted by Healy — 48 days, 1 hour before the deadline
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DeveloperSubmitted

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Thought it was a little boring-- every choice leading to death and the restart mechanic made it more of a 'okay, is there any way I don't die' instead of a scary suspenseful tale, but there really is no way to not die. I think it could have been better if there was an escape ending, or one where you're bitten and escape, so there's something other than 'and here's how you die horribly after being chased'. It's not that that's an inherently bad thing, it just felt kind of repetitive since it's how all the endings go. 

DeveloperSubmitted

I mean, that's a fair criticism. I should mention that there is one ending where you don't die, but it's still a bad ending.

A ghort little zombie story - quite good, perhaps a bit abrupt, but I lied the fact that the creator added some ambience with a youtube video. Set the tone a little bit. Is there any way to "win" the game?

DeveloperSubmitted

Not really. I mean, there's one ending where you don't die, but you cause a lot of other issues in the process.

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Yeah I think I got that one. Reminds me of the old choose your own adventure books. Good stuff though. :)