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Amika333 rated a Visual Novel 2 days ago
A browser Visual Novel made in HTML5.
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android.
Atomoide rated a game 6 days ago
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux.
CJIGGE rated a game 9 days ago
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android.
ribet2015 rated a game 11 days ago
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android.
JackieSon rated a game 16 days ago
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android.
Jaded John rated a Visual Novel 17 days ago
A browser Visual Novel made in HTML5.
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux.
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux.
xeroia rated a Visual Novel 26 days ago
A browser Visual Novel made in HTML5.
mimmi2002 rated a game 27 days ago
A downloadable game for Windows.
A downloadable game for Windows.

Reads like something I would write when I was a 10 year old wanting to write something that was 'deep' and 'serious' and 'sad but realistic', but did not yet have actual life experience to pull from. All of the processes in here, from police work to being an orphan in the US to living with cancer are all depicted incredibly shallow. The most self aware the VN ever seems to get is when the narrator suddenly breaks the 4th wall to go 'uhhh a 25 year old hanging with a 15 year old minor? That's fishy', but then the VN never seems to actually try to address or fix the concerns outside of this awkward 4th wall break that ruins the mood and never goes anywhere.

From the odd way the characters refers to the 'East Coast' as One Specific Beach rather then an entire region and the awkward English, I suspect the dev isn't from the US? The basic premise of a linear VN that is sentimental and reflective on memories isn't inherently bad, but it's something that really requires the creator to base it on something highly personal for it to have any real impact rather then pulling tropes and ideas from other media that you don't have any personal ties to.

I admire how much effort the dev put into marketing the game, if only every dev could be so diligent. I do think some of that energy could have been put into improving the writing though, or even into editing the script so the English is less awkward.

h3xpl01t rated a game 32 days ago
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux.
SimonFromSprunki rated a Visual Novel 38 days ago
A browser Visual Novel made in HTML5.
DanniDixx rated a game 48 days ago
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android.

Make this into an interactive point and click sandbox style or even harem game and you've got yourself a quality game. This is just another lame visual novel

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