Amazing art and lovely voice acting!
I completely forgot to rate this one last year, better late than never :)
I can't get past the writing. In a Visual Novel, it's an equal distribution of Writing, Storytelling, and Illustration. If any one is of low quality, it becomes a slog. I'm a bit of a perfectionist, but even so—a complete project should be spellchecked, looked over, examined for grammatical incongruity. If not for that, I would have thoroughly enjoyed it, undoubtedly; it's just not to standard.