Thanks for the feedback and for playing! For the first: I did it that way as I gotten feedback on my last project that a wall of text is not that great and it would be nicer to have smaller bits. The second: ...Yes. Now that you mention it: Yes, absolutely. I did cut out some choices because of time, but still.... Should have made it a page button. Thanks. That was a last minute decision and it seems to work. Maaaaaybe it's meta-commentary? Could very well be.
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cons: Is there a way to make it so the whole page appears at once, instead of a click per paragraph?
Also, sometimes there would be only one choice, so if only one, why not just make it a turn-page button?
pros: I like the parchment look of the "paper," helps with the theme and mood.
I also liked wondering if the plot about the painting was a meta-commentary on these games as art :)
Thanks for the feedback and for playing!
For the first: I did it that way as I gotten feedback on my last project that a wall of text is not that great and it would be nicer to have smaller bits.
The second: ...Yes. Now that you mention it: Yes, absolutely. I did cut out some choices because of time, but still.... Should have made it a page button.
Thanks. That was a last minute decision and it seems to work.
Maaaaaybe it's meta-commentary? Could very well be.
Cool idea.