Ooh, a VN with choice of POV! I ended up going Andrea, Siegfried, Siegfried. A unique look; clever insert of the Dark Pack logo.
I especially liked Siegfried's internal monologue ("Supper saves the day"); also, a cat called Lucifer but nicknamed Lulu, I live for these little pops of color in people's writing.
Thank you so much, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Especially glad you enjoyed Siegfried, I struggled I think the most with finding a good tone for his monologue. Thank you for your comment, and for playing!
The focus on dancing made this quite an unusual story. Very well written. The different perspectives were very cool, maybe it could have had more choices. The music and sounds are also great.
Thank you for playing and your kind comment! I agree with you about the number of choices - unfortunately started working on this a bit too late, and with me being new to the engine I had to keep it from branching too much. Glad you enjoyed nevertheless!
This was a lot of fun, I really liked the different perspectives. Siegfried was eerie and confident and the graphics are simple but effective. I also very much enjoyed the Portuguese words about dancing, they were a great cultural context.
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Ooh, a VN with choice of POV! I ended up going Andrea, Siegfried, Siegfried. A unique look; clever insert of the Dark Pack logo.
I especially liked Siegfried's internal monologue ("Supper saves the day"); also, a cat called Lucifer but nicknamed Lulu, I live for these little pops of color in people's writing.
All in all, short and sweet.
Thank you so much, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Especially glad you enjoyed Siegfried, I struggled I think the most with finding a good tone for his monologue. Thank you for your comment, and for playing!
The focus on dancing made this quite an unusual story. Very well written. The different perspectives were very cool, maybe it could have had more choices. The music and sounds are also great.
Thank you for playing and your kind comment! I agree with you about the number of choices - unfortunately started working on this a bit too late, and with me being new to the engine I had to keep it from branching too much. Glad you enjoyed nevertheless!
This was a lot of fun, I really liked the different perspectives. Siegfried was eerie and confident and the graphics are simple but effective. I also very much enjoyed the Portuguese words about dancing, they were a great cultural context.
I'm happy you enjoyed it! And thank you so much for playing ^^