I enjoyed the interlude text between days, they were beautifully poetic and illustrative. The outfits of the wolves are well-designed, with an interesting backstory of opposing groups as they slowly mingle with each other as seasons pass. Having the main color of the UI be purple also alludes to this mixture. Communicating complex feelings through shared sign language is something I have tried to do before, I can understand their struggle. I noticed in the final scene they do not speak in italics anymore, have they learned a common language by then?
Two small errors I noticed was some beginning dialogue describing the heatwave being skipped, and a typo that had an extra space in, “Before I knew it, I arrived at the park, again.” Finally, if the main menu music continues as the game starts, there is no need to “play” it again in the script.
Wishing the best for Hennalin, their worried expression is precious, and I can relate to them!