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Hey! Great job getting something in during the 48 hours! I had a few thoughts while reading.

  • You have a lot of lore but I don't know if I ever really understood where / when we were. I think less would have given you more.
  • The amount of different scenarios you have in here is staggering!
  • Your squire classes are really nicely done. Because I knew exactly what to expect, and upon reading further, my thoughts were confirmed.

Overall, you have a ton to work with but I think you need to trim it back to let other parts of your system grow. Then later you can add stuff back in. Zombies especially haha.