For me it relayed a bit too much on descriptions based on the story...
My issue mainly with this story is, besides the notes. It doesn't really feel like a visual novel. More like a novel. The ending felt like a visual novel. Something was off here for me in it that didn't felt like I am reading a vn.
It's definitly an experience. It's just a harder time for people like me that can't read novels greatly.
It wasn't a bad one though. The music and usage of sprites works. I wished all the names would be like didi and gogo to give your own iconic touch.
I think the best thing would have been just the bunny floating and all the other ones be differently fullbody. XD
Still even with some *annoying* things. I can recommend this trip to read and maybe people can find things behind the descriptions that I cannot see.