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I really liked your wolf sprite!  The large expressive eyes, and the fact that there was more than one perspective.  I really enjoyed the expressions on the scene with the side profile.

The bad ending seemed a little out of nowhere for me, but there were several clues that something wasn't right the entire time.  Was the lack of music at times to make it a feel a bit foreboding?

I did enjoy your writing style quite a lot!  I would love to see what you can make without time or theme constraints in the future!

Thanks! I'll be writing a bigger project soon so hopefully things go well there! As for music, it was for a more "realistic" feel for lack of a better term. Seems that didn't work out, so I'll keep it in mind for my next project :)

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Nothing at all wrong with experimenting; I did that with several things this time around.  Some landed, most didn't, but now while other developers are looking and sharing their thoughts with us is the best time to try new things before working on something bigger!  

I didn't mind the lack of music in spots, I was just unsure if there was a deeper meaning behind it, as I can be dense sometimes an miss context clues.  Often our choices can be interpreted differently by readers in ways we never intended, and on certain occasions actually enhance their experience.  Just happy little accidents! Again, great read for me.