a few corrections to chapter 7
MC to Monika
"So, Have you starting dating again? Or even just looking?"
could be
"So, have you started dating again, or are you just looking?"
(Starting MUST be "Started" the rest is optional)
later...
Olivia says
"But i was young and stupid and enjoyed the attention so i kept "teased" him
should be "Teasing him"
maybe pass the whole text to chat gpt to ask for obvious errors ?