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Man... I'm sorry to break it up but... Game is bad...  The writing makes my head ache, the navigation system too.. 

Most of the pronounce are wrong and the sentence arc is messed up too... 


I mean, I'm not an English mother tongue too, but I know, like everyone else, that male has he/him and female has she/her.. 5 mins into the game and I struggle to go on already.. 


I don't want to be an hater, nor to be toxic, but I suggest you to take some help with the writings, cause for now is  poorly written.. 

The navigation as it is for now, is fidgety.. Also if you skip time in a building you get teleported in the main "map".. 

I guess you are at the beginning, but please, before going on with the story, fix some things..