Thanks for your review! Glad the art/dialogue/execution of the concept are alright. I'm not sure which way around the tone/pacing consistency is being addressed. Is the mall section better for its consistency, or is the difference between the other parts too much? Writing is one of my weaker skills and I am grateful for feedback about it!
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Hello! I have stumbled upon your VN as I was looking to read New VNs.
The art is lovingly colorful, sweet, nice & cute! I find the story fun & to my liking. All in all, its great and I'm glad to have found it.
I want to inform you that I found your VN from this Furry VN Community Discord Server
https://discord.gg/yZUUVEqR9m
Thought I'd let you know that people shared a lot of these May Wolf Jam VNs and have its own special channel to pick & choose those VNs that you want to read (like a list). Your VN got shared which caught my attention!
There are already other VN Creators present & if you're looking to share/promote to a wider audience, this is the place for it. They also have resources for VN Development and can search for specific people with talents like artist/musician/proofreader/editor/programmer etc usually needed in making a VN.
Overall, there's a lot of amazing people and nice atmosphere. I hope you will enjoy the server & wishing you luck for whatever jam/project you're gonna do next. Keep it up!