This one was a lot of fun to read, I tore through it! Goofy, light-hearted, just a lot of fun. I'm not sure it was your intention, but beyond "Expanding" JJ's size I interpreted the food truck as an "Expansion" of his fathers' bakery, if you did this on purpose GREAT JOB.
If you didn't LIE ABOUT IT. As such, I thought you applied the theme really well!
I liked the sprites, too, they just vibe with the story really well! You also wrote the cake-pop lion so hateable and even though he's on screen for just a few scenes he makes me think of that annoying foodie hipster we all know.
The story was simple and straight forward, but fun! I think you applied theme well (on purpose or otherwise), and you picked good music to go with your scenes. All in all? A fast, fun, silly slice of life about donuts. Great work! I hope you make more VN's in the future.
EDIT: Thank you for embracing the Hole jokes. Also cute Minotaur Hotel ref, KHENBISH SUPREMACY.