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First off, I loved the colorful art style!  I feel it was the perfect vibe for the game!

I know many on here are more strict in regard to the theme, but I'm personally quite liberal in my interpretation of it, and to me, it appeared that your wolf was breaking out of their shell and expanding into new ideas about relationships and changing themselves in ways they never considered before.  That, and also I'd rather a story that strays from the theme and is more solid than one that sticks closely, but suffers for it.

One of my pet peeves in many visual novels that implement a points system is when I feel a protagonist or their love interest give up their entire agency to have a satisfying conclusion to their route.  Neither one should just say what they think the other one wants to hear all the time just to he in a relationshio, though it also has to be balanced with the concept of compatibility, and can be a fine line to walk.  

I believe you avoided that pitfall, though my one reservation is there were so many choice questions in such a short timeframe.  I know that is mostly due to the size of the project and the amount of time to bring it to conclusion, but if you expound on this story or concept in the future.  

If there was a way to start with the questions, then gradually show the wolf's growth where they start to ask a question, then realize that they don't need your opinion on every decision, and at the end, confidently walk away from the situation with their ex, maybe already having the new relationship established and kissing the protagonist as they leave together would be a more fulfilling arc, but that's just a suggestion, and may not line up with your vision of the project.  If it is already implemented, and I just didn't make the right choices to get that conclusion, please disregard : )

Overall, I really enjoyed this one, and really liked the 'pick your path' mall map.  I look forward to seeing what you do in the future!