Your VN is the one most easy to fix imo. This will sound out of place but, actual music in the fix version of Hilltop would be bad or good, in your opinion?
It'd be good as long as they improve the art and story, too! In my opinion, an actually good soundtrack would be out of place in the intentionally bad version.
I think I'm making a actively worse version of the thing, for a fix version that's sad. It doesn't have much to it more than nonsense scenes. It's fine to still go with that?
edit: I wasn't able to do it, I'm not in the best state of a lot of things, that including that what I was writing was really uninteresting and boring. I'm sorry.