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I'm sorry to hear that the ending didn't hold up to the rest of the story for you.

Out of curiosity, what was the "more" you were expecting? Was there a different narrative or sequence of events you wanted to see?

I can't explain properly what I would like to see. It just felt it lacked feelings, emotions, and we got to see a closure for Chris and Tonraq and for Lilly and Hallie but the destiny of all others was a bit lost. The relation of Tonraq with Kuak, Yuka and Philip, I feel it lacked a more detailed story to tell about all characters, after all they all took part in Chris's journey. 

But nonethelesss, it was a great novel that trapped me from beginning to end. Thank you for creating such a beautiful story. 

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Hm, yeah! I can see where you're coming from. The final chapter was a slow-coast epilogue where we focused on Chris tying up the ends of his issues at home. There wasn't a lot of room to elaborate beyond his life, partly due to the restraints of the first-person narrative.

However! You'll be happy to know we're working on a Summer episode VN! Hopefully, the extra story should help soothe that "rushed" feeling.

I'll be eagerly waiting for it!!! 🥰