Hey, I'm starting as well, but I've been working on my own VN for a few months now and I think I could help (Well I mean, if you already got help from people who are more experienced, then def go for them first.)
Well I'll be honest, when I started out in January, I had NO clue how to code with renpy. BUT just letting you know, it is so easy to learn. I could help you out more, but I have to know what your VN is about or something like that.
Well, if we're really talking about it, I really don't have any knowledge about this VN, so I'd like to ask you. Well, if it wouldn't be rude, could we talk via other routes, such as Facebook or IG? Will I get it or not? If it's like that, I'd probably be better off. ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ
Of course, I was about to say, I think this place is for feedback, but yk, privacy and whatnot. I do not have IG or Facebook, but I do use discord and Gmail. Do either of those work for you?