Solid entry! A few typos here and there but the writing was strong and the use of sound and music quite effective. The story has just enough humour to make its use of cosmic horror tropes and Lovecraft references fun without feeling too derivative. The characters feel distinct and have their own distinct voices. Will seemed a bit bland compared to his more colourful fiance and uncle, but that kind of works since navigating between their personalities is part of the conflict in the story.