The way you wrote the announcement on Discord scared the shit out of me, uncalled for lmfao
Here is my review!
I remember finding out about this game from the first update, and how instantly I became so hooked to the story! I remember thinking how interesting it was to find a VN about MMA, wondering how it would turn out. Color me surprised at how unexpectedly I saw this game become something SO GOOD. The writing is PEAK, the way it builds up suspense is the best because omg I could not help but be on the edge of my seat as the story kept rising to its climax. I enjoyed every second of this game, the worldbuilding is great, and the characters have SO much personality (I can't get over how well they were written). The overall story is something I never expected but was so very pleasantly surprised as I watched it unfold. Not to mention, the ending is so satisfying >:D Thank you SO MUCH for creating and sharing this game for others to play! As well as Congrats on finishing it! It feels rare to see VNs get finished lmao.The only thing I wanna critique is that I wish there was a bit more writing when it comes to the Commissioners’ motives. I felt it could’ve been a little more explained as to why he did what he did, because when it’s revealed, he just kind of seemed to be a villain just to be a villain (and a dick to everyone). But from the character’s perspective, I can see why it doesn’t really get explained. That and it was a bit misleading (during the updates I mean) that it seemed like there were going to be routes, especially with that choice of interests. However, looking back on it I see how it was only a choice for different dialogue in that specific scene. I really don’t mind it being linear anyway, I loved how it turned out in the end for those three ;3
IMO, 8.5/10, such a good story.
Talking about the update itself... (spoilers)
OOH THE SUSPENSE GOT ME SO STRESSED, EVERYTHING KEPT BUILDING AND BUILDING UNTIL BOOM, THE GUY SOMEHOW FUCKING STABS HIMSELF LMAOOOAlso, why the fuck they got whole ass prison cells up in this bitch? THANK GOD FOR BUCKY, he definitely was the best one to beat the shit out of Cole, I wish they both beat him more but time was important lmao. My heart dropped when Red went missing tho, why did he meander his way out of bed the second he woke up lol, poor guy. And STILL, he gets talked down to when he finds his grandpa and Zander, I laughed when he said ‘fuck him up,’ AND OH BOY DID WE, GO ZANDER. SWEET SWEET REVENGE. Also, Theodore literally missed his shot from point-blank range… HOW? LIKE, I DIDN’T THINK HE WOULD SHOOT AT ALL, I GOT SO SCARED WHEN HE DID.
UGH, this game was so good. I WAS PRUMPING MY FISTS SO HARD WHEN THEY BECAME A THREEWAY RELATIONSHIP, THEY’RE ALL SO MEANT FOR EACH OTHER I LOVE IT. The ending couldn’t have been any more satisfying, I loved how it all turned out ;3;
I’m so looking forward to seeing what else is in store from the team ❤