I feel the music hit all the centerright notes, but the story centerleft me wanting just a bit more.
All joking aside, I'm glad the relationship didn't immediately pick back up and go from zero to 100 in four days' time. I felt, however, like we spent more time trying to saying goodbye to our old friend than getting to meet our love interest.
I still enjoyed the writing, though, and feel the concept came through quite well.
I also want to comment on the wonderful cutscene art. I am in awe of those who can look at the game sprites and create such great artwork with other peoples' characters. I can barely keep my style consistent with my own!
Great job, especially since this wasn't your only project! I look forward to seeing more in the future!