- Interesting "Story so far" but the "Intro" took a different direction haha
- LOVE THE MENTOR angle. That's clever.
- I like the forgetting of skills mechanically, but I want it to make a bit more narrative sense. Don't really have a suggestion on how though...
- Who is playing the Hero and the Foes?
- The "Advice" is fantastic! Generally, I think cards can tend to feel a bit board game esque... but here not so! Good job!
- The mentor classes are also great. As well as the items, foes, and allies sheets. Nice.
- AND MENTOR CARDS! NIIIIIICE!
Yeah, overall, I really liked this one. Only suggestion would be to make the hero mechanics on the same level of polish as the mentors because you NAILED them!