This slaps severely, and not just because the VVitch is my favourite movie ever. I think you captured the language of the time really well and I think the formatting was effective in conveying a back and forth between two people who know how to manipulate each other (even if one is better at it than the other). It felt almost like reading a stage play :) And the sudden shift in dialect at the end was morbidly hilarious--I'm looking forward to the other 2 acts