Visual Novels are really not my thing, but I felt like this was relatively well done. I liked the length, pacing, and it didn't feel like there was any wasted time. I usually end up just clicking quickly through most of the dialogue until I see something that looks interesting, but I actually read the vast majority of the dialogue here!
I think the story could use a little more depth, but it worked great for the jam and the conflation of religion and capitalism worked very well!