I mean this comment in the most constructive way possible but the story has got to be more spaced out and built up. Idk if its cause the audio was quiet or what but I didnt hear any of the radio bits or the guy talking. Maybe they gave more info on the story and lore but the only lore I got was in the 10 second bit that came out of nowhere when trying to leave the store and it just felt really out of the blue. Overall though not bad and I think you've got solid ideas its just the execution of them you gotta mess with