This was a genuinely delightful experience. The unique style you've given it (comparing to other sugarcube games) really adds a bunch, and the art adds ten times more.
More importantly, it's paced and written really well. It's goofy and memey, but behind that I see a really efficient and economical writing style that really benefits this kind of fast-paced "click-and-skim" playstyle that a lot of twine games encourage.
A lot of twine games struggle against their own medium, but you've managed to swim through it like a fish through water. Kudos!