I finished reading Takane's route and enjoyed it a lot. Both Hinata and Takane are likeable characters, it was nice and heart-warming to see them teaming up to find the truth about their curses together. I'm very fond of Hinata as protagonist. I liked how she kept her original personality while becoming more caring towards other people.
Both of the endings felt very powerful. The final plot twist with Botan-chan in the "Melancholy" ending was surprising. I wonder if it's going to play some role in the other routes. The "Debt Erased" ending was perfect and cute, the sunset CGs are very beautiful (and all the other CGs are great too!).
I'm looking forward to Nitori's and Riku's routes!
P.S. I found a typo: "I might still call out because of the stress, and that I can’t explain why I still why I have my wings on."