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I quite like the concept and story, animations are great and the writing is good too, I just gotta say that it does seem to move a little fast. (Spoiler warning)















Like there was nothing about why Lisa suddenly calls MC Master, kinda feels like that'd be a big thing but maybe thats just me.  I think eventually a little more filler and world building could be beneficial to the story itself, make it more real and build emotional connections with the characters.

It's the world's "mechanic" explained in the intro, every girl that's tamed calls the MC by the title "Master", but you can change that for each of them.

No no I'm aware of that, I just think that suddenly showing up to a close friends house, finding an animal girl and suddenly having her tamed got glossed over a bit. There was no question about it or anything, just one moment she wasnt there and now she is. Just a little odd to me.

It's part of the world's "mechanic", it's normal, and it's how the world works, as shown in the intro.

And listening to the story, Emily and Rose did both know about her and that she was living there.

Here i have to say that Rose and Emily never said anything about her calling the Mc master

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Why would they?


As I said, they both knew that she was hiding in the attic, and the master-tamer thing is part of the world, so it’s not something that’s a rare and weird occurrence.

I feel like something is getting lost in translation, because I’ve said this multiple times now, and I know it’s also said in the game.

I guess they just wanted the two to comment on it, even if it's like a single sentence, I understand in the world it'd be a common occurrence though

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Yeah exactly, especially Emily who seems to have feelings for the MC, I kinda feel like she wouldn't just ignore the fact that MC is suddenly tamed to Lisa, she'd likely say something about it or ask for an explanation.