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Um...Thanks?


But really, this is only my first visual novel, made by a RenPy newbie. I have no idea why people (like you, for example) still flock to this shit.  I released another visual novel since then (Snow Angel and Silver Devil), and I am currently trying to brainstorm ideas for a potential third VN (if I can get some folks to help me in writing and art, since those are my weaker points).

Also,  two main endings? The true end I get, what's the other "main ending"?

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I forget the name of the ending, but it's the one where you give up your legs. I will have to check those out. Also I truly did intend for that to be a complement.

Legs to One, Mind to None? That's only one of two bad ends. The game's got four ends in total.

Maybe it's just 'cause I'm sensitive to these sorts of things (as someone whose past work was put in cringe compilations), but yeah. I will give you this: At least you didn't resort to insulting my beginner's project and call Rosetta a "dumb Mary Sue" like I've seem so many fucking times in ManlyBadassHero's comment section (lol)

I know, I got all of the endings. I don't know what a "dumb mary sue" is supposed to mean, but I am guessing it is meant to be very insulting. I don't think your game is cringey at all though. I'm sensitive about my art as well so I completely understand, but I only meant it as constructive criticism. Overall the game was quite good. As for specifics the artwork during the animated segments of "Legs to One, Mind to None?" and "True End" seemed a lot more rushed and needing more polish compared to art seen throughout the rest of the game. All of that aside, don't let people who put down your work bother you, they are just jealous because they cannot create even half of what you have and so they lash out. Your work is good, and if you don't let them get to you, and keep improving through practice and experience then some day you will be making games people will be begging to play.

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Looking at it now...yeah, the artwork in some areas I'm not too proud of. But really, I lost motivation towards the end and didn't have many frames of reference when it came to coming up with CGs and such, so I just winged it...Maybe I'll get it next time.

But yeah, I'm glad you still saw potential in me. Thank you.